Drafting and planning- Draft after peer marked

Here is my final draft where i tried to complete everything that my teacher and peers told me however i did not complete some things and i am not fully happy with it. I needed to change the font of the words 'Malik Forrester' under the picture of the boy on the bottom left of the contents page and i also needed to write the boys name in the top right picture. 
I changed the background to black but there is still a lot of blank space. Therefore i need to change this for my final Magazine.